just wrote a paper about people and cars Options

[rjbibeau]

The type of people who build up cars to make them faster and look sleek can be looked at by it’s their job, a hobby, or a passion. The people who work on cars as their job are doing it to make a living for themselves and possibly a family at home to support. They may hate their job, but their somewhat stuck within the field maybe because of lack of education. There many people within the field that love their job within the automotive industry but unfortunately some of them are forced to quit because their hands and body take the brutal beating on the job and no longer are they able to perform their job at their highest expectations. Then there are people that work on cars for a passion. These are the type of people the love to get themselves full of grease from head to toe. They put every minute of their spare time and extra money that they have earned into their automobile; it’s a way to express to other people the talent and your uniqueness that you and the love for one’s car. These are the type of people that refuse to bring their car to a mechanic, and they do all of the work on cars themselves and aren’t scared to just jump right into things without knowing what their going to expect. People also work on cars as a hobby whether it’s just a simple thing as an oil change or even as complicated as an engine swap. People like this enjoy working on cars but not to the extent that they constantly think about them constantly unlike the people that have a passion for them. Whether you work on cars for a job, passion, or as a hobby there will always be nice looking and fast cars driving down the streets for everyone to wish that they were driving that.



is this not an A paper

This post has been edited by rjbibeau: Apr 4, 2005 - 12:36 AM

[Newbie]

That was excellent. My excellence tear sheds for you.. Such a beautiful paragraph...

[Anub1s]

Thought I would help a bit. It's not perfect but I think it is better.





People who build automobiles to make them faster and look sleek, can be looked at in a couple different ways. First, it’s their job. Second, it is a hobby. Third, it is their passion.

People who work on cars as their occupation are doing it to support themselves and possibly their family at home. Often, they hate their jobs, but they may be somewhat stuck because of lack of education. There many people within who love their job in the automotive industry, but unfortunately some of them are forced to quit. Mechanics hands and bodies take brutal beatings on the job and they are no longer able to perform their job.

People also work on cars as a hobby. Whether it’s as simple as an oil change or even as complicated as an engine swap, they enjoy working on cars but not to the extent that people that have a passion for the work do.

People who work on cars for passion, are the type of people the love to get soaked in grease from head to toe. They put every minute of their spare time and extra money into their automobile. Often, it’s a way to express to other people the talent and uniqueness that they posses and the love they have for their car. They refuse to take their car to a mechanic, and they do all of the work themselves. They are not scared to just jump right into things without knowing what to expect.

Whether working on cars is your occupation, hobby, or passion, you are always welcome to display your work for all to see and admire. Let us make this an industry and hobby worth fighting for.

This post has been edited by Anub1s: Apr 4, 2005 - 3:05 AM

[rjbibeau]

ohh man good revision!!!! english major

[Anub1s]

yeah right, thats me being bored out of my mind at work. I barely completed 1010

[BlackCelicaGT94]

What about the person who does it cuz of all three?

My dad does it for a hobby, its his passion and its his job. Well his career is related to workin on them

[rjbibeau]

then your just special