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 Oct 6, 2004 - 8:31 PM
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About my celica it was about 3 pages long and i didnt even get into to much detail i only taked about the engine, outside, and how it makes me feel. Its incredit what you can do when you write aobut somethig u like.
i would post it but yall probley wouldnt read it anyways |
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Oct 13, 2004 - 7:33 PM
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usually atleast in my experience, you should try not to use acronyms, try saying "limited slip" instead of LSD.
overall its a pretty good story, you did a real good job desplaying the emotion JD was going through. there were alot of gramatical errors, stuff just like switching tenses and words not lining up right. give it a proofread once or twice and you should be good to go! Initial D meets 2F2F 
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Exile04 Just wrote a paper Oct 6, 2004 - 8:31 PM
tim86 sweet, i might have to do the same thing next time... Oct 6, 2004 - 8:39 PM YellowTwo Post it! I'll read it Oct 7, 2004 - 12:32 AM SlowCelica94 I'm writing an informative paper on street rac... Oct 7, 2004 - 10:38 AM OrbitalGT95 Yeah im writing a story right now on streetracing.... Oct 7, 2004 - 4:37 PM mr_dude After the Nissan gets caught and impounded, have t... Oct 7, 2004 - 11:55 PM OrbitalGT95 hahahahaha..wow..thats classic..i will def keep th... Oct 8, 2004 - 9:10 AM SlowCelica94 I've got a powerpoint with mine. I'll have... Oct 8, 2004 - 9:42 AM OrbitalGT95 yeah, i'll do that slowcelica Oct 10, 2004 - 4:07 PM Andason only in high school can you get away with writing ... Oct 10, 2004 - 6:17 PM Akimbo QUOTE (OrbitalGT95 @ Oct 7, 2004 - 5:37 PM) 97 nis... Oct 10, 2004 - 6:34 PM Exile04 QUOTE (Andason @ Oct 10, 2004 - 11:17 PM) onl... Oct 10, 2004 - 7:02 PM Andason nothing personal but your writing structure is hor... Oct 10, 2004 - 7:10 PM Akimbo I pray to God you don't have to read that or s... Oct 10, 2004 - 7:54 PM OrbitalGT95 be nice guys Oct 10, 2004 - 8:53 PM Andason QUOTE (OrbitalGT95 @ Oct 10, 2004 - 7:53 PM) be ni... Oct 10, 2004 - 8:55 PM Andason Try writing your paragraphs in the TEST format:
T... Oct 10, 2004 - 8:57 PM chucho QUOTE (Andason @ Oct 10, 2004 - 8:57 PM) Try writi... Oct 10, 2004 - 10:01 PM ghostdog QUOTE (Andason @ Oct 10, 2004 - 8:10 PM) nothing p... Oct 10, 2004 - 10:58 PM Exile04 hey cool cuz like i said its a draft...and i actul... Oct 10, 2004 - 11:47 PM SlowCelica94 3s? Did I miss something? When's you get that,... Oct 11, 2004 - 7:00 PM Exile04 no no no...dream celica Oct 11, 2004 - 9:19 PM OrbitalGT95 heres my paper..im prepared for the worst
The s... Oct 13, 2004 - 6:52 PM OrbitalGT95 thanks for the help boosted k2 Oct 13, 2004 - 9:36 PM boosted_K2 not a problem man Oct 13, 2004 - 10:37 PM
ShadowFX Yeah main thing i picked up on was the tense chang... Oct 14, 2004 - 1:09 AM |
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